Monday, September 24, 2012

The Editing Process

Here is a good example of what I did to a painting that I did not like in order to like it...I had to remove a few things....change a few things...until it said what I really wanted it to say to the best of my ability...can you count how many ways in which it was changed?   Zinnias and Guitar oil on canvas 30x30"

4 comments:

  1. Umm... err.. I like them both.

    However, the onion is no longer doing a wiggiedig across the table, the armchair and chest are gone, the floor is different, and the pillow on the remaining chair is a deeper color. The guitar has more definition..

    but as I said, I like them both.

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  2. you are very observant(no surprise)...there are at least 5 other changes ...funny how when you touch one thing it leads to others...

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  3. I said this in class but will add here, this is a really helpful insight, thank you! As a writer I know the value of going back again and again to make it work, but somehow thought it has to be perfect the first time when painting...silly me.

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  4. oh silly you! and silly all of us!thanks for the input...

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